I taught P4 English Creative class today and my student wrote this composition titled "VIOLANCE" (he spelt it like that) AND IT WAS SUPER FUNNY!!! While he was writing it, he was laughing madly to himself too.Let me type out a paragraph of his compo. His exact words, exact spelling, exact capitalisation.
[ Then they came, John turned their car into a robot which killed all of the soldiers. Then, out of nowhere, the robot exploded. Then his COOL brother came with COOL GUNS AND COOL WHITE HAIR WITH COOL WHITE ARMOUR. HE SHOT JOHN but John survived. John's three heads killed his brother but suddenly his brother was revived. His brother shot the sun which fell.Down, the Earth was destroyed, everybody died even John. Everybodies heads were NOWHERE 2 BE FOUND.
HA HA HA HA John's heads grew back, everyone survived.
John's brother died and John smiled. "It's time to rule the world."
Then, his girlfriend appeared. John turned her into a mutant.
AND THEN BOTH RULED THE WORLD HA HA HA
THE END
Presented by ________ ]
I was laughing my head off.
I gave him 17/20. He lost 2 marks for language and 1 for content :)
